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Tuesday, February 20, 2007

Critique - Heavy Object (Erik)

"Here comes my idea about moving heavy object. (no texture, yet.) Idea comes from some people believe aliens help human to build pyramid...what do you think about this?"














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Hey Erik,

I wouldn't worry about textures, it will be easier to judge without them. The idea is good, but just looking at that picture I would have never guessed that it was about aliens helping out with the pyramids.

That's because all you can see is the shiny tip of the pyramid. The lower part of it is hidden under the wooden planks. I would add pyramids in the background with the silver tip, that way it's a bit more obvious.
It's also not clear that the character is an alien (just coloring him green is not enough, you need to find typical characteristics of an alien).

Keep going!

1 comment:

Erik said...

Yep, I agree with you on put other pyramid on background. For more clear stagging, I even think about add a silver space ship on there.

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