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Monday, October 8, 2007

Critique - "Jello"

This works a lot better, nicely done. If there is a way to put the screen right student more into frame, that would be good, so he's not that cut off.
The hands are fine, but as you get into a more refined stage you can add more business to them, instead of them just being cupped together, not too much, it's nice how it's a bit contained before the outbreak, plus it lets you concentrate on the character's face. He could hold his hands together, rub them a little bit, relax the hands, stuff like that.
At the end, when he screams at the kid, I would have him look straight into his face, not looking down the way it is now.

Basics are blocked out, now you can put all the good stuff in it! Can't wait to see it!


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