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Saturday, November 10, 2007

Critique - Jello

I would shake the table bit more, it is too small, you're right.

Watch the left kid's left hand, it floats down from x50 to x200 and up til x280, stabilize that.

Look at the left kid's right foot, the toes are right where the table leg is, the foot feels almost wedged between the legs.

Move the foot back a bit.

It might be the movie only, maybe because of some compression, but the mouth shapes feel late. Please check on your side if the audio is too early.

Nice work though, pretty much done. I know, I'm always saying that. :)


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