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Tuesday, December 4, 2007

Critique - Marry










About your blocking:

The main thing that sticks out are the poses on x112+ and around x220. He looks like he's talking to those flat shapes. If he's that much in love, I would have him gaze to the horizon or the sky, like he's on cloud 9.
Also have him look more straight ahead with left/right direction changes inbetween (roughly). Right now he's a bit fixated on the screen left part.

Keep going!

Cheers
JD

3 comments:

Joey said...

Oh..I forgot to mention about the books he is looking at. There's going to be a famous female chef picture on a book cover. If so, does it make sense why he is looking at it?

Jean-Denis Haas said...

Ah okay, makes sense now. Make sure that all your ideas are in the blocking when you present it to someone in order to avoid confusion. :)

Joey said...

Thanks..I'm tweaking poses and adding some breakdowns..

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