Critique - Marry
About your blocking:
The main thing that sticks out are the poses on x112+ and around x220. He looks like he's talking to those flat shapes. If he's that much in love, I would have him gaze to the horizon or the sky, like he's on cloud 9.
Also have him look more straight ahead with left/right direction changes inbetween (roughly). Right now he's a bit fixated on the screen left part.
Keep going!
Cheers
JD
3 comments:
Oh..I forgot to mention about the books he is looking at. There's going to be a famous female chef picture on a book cover. If so, does it make sense why he is looking at it?
Ah okay, makes sense now. Make sure that all your ideas are in the blocking when you present it to someone in order to avoid confusion. :)
Thanks..I'm tweaking poses and adding some breakdowns..
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